I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, December 15, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post!
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Kia Ora James,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Shannon, and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.
You’ve done a great job on the comic! Well done! I particularly like your use of actions through asterisks which is a creative way to express action in a comic strip. You’ve also used captions which explain the wild facial expressions we see in some of the images!
If you could write a comic on absolutely anything, what would you write about? I think I’d write about space adventures and rocket ships, not fishy teeth, though it is pretty funny.
Perhaps you could increase the size of your post so your readers can better appreciate your comic. It would make it a bit easier to read.
Ka kite anō,
Shannon (SLJ)