I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
A good effort this week James. you have done a great job at laying out your slides with clear titles that show which questions you are attempting to answer. My tip for next time is that when you are reading, read the text 3 times! The first time just read through the text. For the next two times have the questions you need to answer, or the information points you are seeking copy and pasted into a word document in front of you, or write them into your workbook. Then when you are reading keep the questions in your mind. When you come across an answer in your reading you can type it into the word document or write into your workbook. That word document, or your workbook, will then give you all the information you need to complete your DLO and your blog post. Great effort, you just needed to have presented a few more bits of information from the readings to answer the questions. Also remember to put the week number (week 10) and the WALT: monitor our reading to ensure we have a full and deep understanding of what we read) on the first slide. Well done. Mrs Ali :)
hi my name is Dylan i like the way you made it clear what hapend in the story next time you could make the wiring a little bit bigger `did you copy and paste it ?
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A good effort this week James. you have done a great job at laying out your slides with clear titles that show which questions you are attempting to answer. My tip for next time is that when you are reading, read the text 3 times! The first time just read through the text. For the next two times have the questions you need to answer, or the information points you are seeking copy and pasted into a word document in front of you, or write them into your workbook. Then when you are reading keep the questions in your mind. When you come across an answer in your reading you can type it into the word document or write into your workbook. That word document, or your workbook, will then give you all the information you need to complete your DLO and your blog post. Great effort, you just needed to have presented a few more bits of information from the readings to answer the questions. Also remember to put the week number (week 10) and the WALT: monitor our reading to ensure we have a full and deep understanding of what we read) on the first slide. Well done. Mrs Ali :)
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